GUEST POST FROM AUTHOR VALERIE NIEMAN

GUEST POST FROM AUTHOR VALERIE NIEMAN

Saturday, 5 April 2025

Welcome historical fiction author Valerie Nieman with a fascinating perspective on researching for her novels.

Tracing Flickering Lights in the Dark

Not so long ago, most of us were putting away the strings of Christmas lights, hoping we won’t find a tangle when we open the bin again come November. That never seems to happen – somehow, the sets manage to knot themselves and cannot be easily pulled into the neat linear strings we expect. Where did all this complication come from?

It can be a bit like that, researching historical fiction. We expect to find a more or less continuous story, a reasonable thread of action and consequences, but history is more tangled than we think. Conspiracy theories aside, the reasons for an incident are often less than clear, people’s motivations are complicated, and people (or nations) may act in unreasonable ways. And history, as we know, is told by the victors.

I began working on my first historical fiction novel, Upon the Corner of the Moon, 30 years ago. People are shocked to learn that! Now I haven’t been writing continuously for three decades, but I have been working. Lots of reading, spells of writing, then back to research. As I was drafting and redrafting, I spent time writing other books – five novels, three books of poetry, a college history. I also went to Scotland on two month-long trips to hike, visit historic sites and museums, and generally “get the lay of the land.”

In this age of “instant art and writing” from AI, the thought of spending a third of a lifetime on one project seems a bit – obsessive. And it is. I came onto the story of the historical Macbeth while researching another book and was intrigued at how my favorite play had completely twisted the story. When I plunged into research for a novel on this topic, I didn’t imagine how deep that rabbit hole could go.

Those working in recent (20th century) historical fiction or studying well-documented eras have the benefit of newspapers, government records, previous histories– but in the more ancient past, records may be few or fragmentary, and they can be severely slanted because of religious or political considerations. Shakespeare based his play on Holinshed’s Chronicles, itself a compilation of earlier chronicles. At each iteration, legends became attached to history, cultural misunderstandings were amplified, and the actual Macbeths were slandered so that the current ruling dynasty might plump up its lineage.

I read original sources such as the “Life of St. Columba” by Adomnan, medieval handbooks of penance, an 18th century survey of the province of Moray that detailed the landscape of my book. I read sagas from the Norse and Danes, which provided some meat but also a lot of gristle: Names are replaced with epithets, dates might not match up, and the details of battles – well, remember that these were composed to glorify the jarl.

Scholarly sources were of great help in understanding the political landscape of northern Europe, from the Cnut’s Great North Sea Empire to the shifting Anglo-Saxon kingdoms. Scotland itself was not united into roughly the form we expect until the early 11th century, under Malcolm II, who welded Strathclyde and Lothian to Alba, and his grandson Macbeth who solidified this realm. The Western Isles remained under control of the Norse, and Orkney was an independent kingdom claiming parts of the north (Caithness).

I also read a lot of books on ancient matriarchal religions and guides to Pictish symbol stones and Celtic runes.

Secondary sources, from popular books to deeply scholarly analyses, were important in helping me untangle the chain of events that led to Macbeth’s death and the change from old Celtic patterns of kingship to primogeniture. That’s why the second book is titled The Last Highland King, because after Macbeth, Scottish rulers were highly Anglicized and connected to the lowlands.

Ultimately, I had to make decisions between competing sources. Was this man a nephew, or an uncle? Did this battle occur in 1054 or 1057? Some recent works invaluable in sorting wheat from tares included Macbeth Before Shakespeare by Benjamin Hudson, Picts: Scourge of Rome, Rulers of the North by Gordon Noble and Nicholas Evans, and The Wolf Age by Tore Skeie.

Research is like that pile of twinkling lights – you see the glimmers, study how the knots have formed, and with patience and some good advice, make a tangle into something that can illuminate the dark.

Thank you, Valerie!

BOOK: Upon the Corner of the Moon

AUTHOR: Valerie Nieman

GENRE: Historical Fiction

BLURB:  At the dawn of the second millennium, two royal Scottish children are swept away from their families—Macbeth to the perilous royal court of his grandfather, Gruach to the remnants of the goddess-worshiping Picts. Macbeth learns that blood bonds are easily severed while Gruach finds her path only to lose it when she’s summoned back to the patriarchal world. They struggle with gaining and losing power, guided and misguided by prophecy and politics as their paths converge in a fiery bid for royal succession. Upon the Corner of the Moon separates literary legend from the reality of rulers who changed the face of Scotland. While closely following recorded history about Macbeth, it also speculates on the heritage of his wife Gruach, drawing on the Neolithic settlement of Alba and the mysterious legacy of the Picts. “Upon the Corner of the Moon is a haunting and bloody tale of Scottish history. It’s also a finger tracing along a set of scars, ones we already know are too deep to ever really heal,” said the Pittsburgh Post-Gazette.

ABOUT THE AUTHOR: Valerie Nieman’s debut historical novel, Upon the Corner of the Moon, is the story of the young Macbeths, destined to unite Scotland in the tumultuous 11th century. To learn more about the people and landscapes, she wandered Scotland from coast to coast and spent many happy hours in museums, libraries, and small pubs. She is the author of a short fiction collection, three poetry books, and six other novels, including In the Lonely Backwater, winner of the 2022 Sir Walter Raleigh Award, which was called “not only a page-turning thriller but also a complex psychological portrait of a young woman dealing with guilt, betrayal, and secrecy.” Her novel Blood Clay won the Eric Hoffer Prize in General Fiction. To the Bones, a horror/Appalachian/ecojustice novel, was a finalist for the 2020 Manly Wade Wellman Award, and now has a sequel, Dead Hand. A graduate of West Virginia University and Queens University of Charlotte, she has held state and National Endowment for the Arts fellowships is professor emerita of creative writing at NC Agricultural and Technical State University.


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MY WRITEDAY MARCH/APRIL ’25 BOX REVEAL

Monday 31 March 2025

Welcome to “Write True” the March/April 2025 box! Writing true means several things to me. Write the truth as you know it whether it’s fiction, nonfiction, memoir, or poetry. Use true words to describe what you believe is the truth. Be authentic and avoid overused words. What does true writing mean to you?

Let’s look at it all.

 

  1.  500 Words You Should Know by Caroline Taggart is not your average “dictionary” because of its organization by theme. Need a unique or special word for mood? It’s in there. Want to use something besides heaven to name it? It’s in there. This is the most unique “dictionary” I’ve ever seen. It even has a bibliography and an index to further support your word cravings. I’d love to know what you think about this book!

  1. Plot Twist inspiration cards. These are not your average inspiration cards for writers. These are not your average cards for coming up with ideas when you’ve hit a bump in the manuscript. Because you never know what you’ll find behind the scratch off area on the card. Just like a lottery ticket, pick a card, get a coin, and scratch off the hidden inspiration. The only difference between Plot Twist cards and lottery tickets is that PT makes you a winner every time. Each hidden message is fodder for fixing plot problems or having something to journal or blog about. The fiction collection is in this box. I love them so much that you are guaranteed to see another genre in a future box! I would love to know how you used these cards. Critique group writing prompt anyone?

  1. Fruit Flavored Chewy Candies consciously crafted by The Lovely Candy Company. Individually wrapped and organic, these candies are perfect for that moment when you want something sweet but don’t want a whole cupcake! The “no” list of ingredients is just as important as what’s in each delicious piece. No artificial colors or flavors, non-GMO, no high fructose corn syrup, or gluten. Awesome.
  2. Candle kit with “natural fireman” is something I created for you. The tea light candles are from an artisan candle maker in California. The sand is what is called a “natural fireman” for candles because if the candle melts or flames out of the container, the sand will automatically and naturally put out the fire! Place the sand in the glass tea light holder then center the candle in the sand. Never burn candles around paper, please😊

  1. Bookshelf Note Pad from Pippi Post products in Kentucky is perfect for lists or keeping in the journal go bag I wrote about in the January/February MWD Digital Magazine. And so cute!
  2. There are reading and writing stickers, a Thoughtfull pop-out journal prompt, and promotional bookmarks from some my author friends.

I adore hearing from you any time! Watch your email in late APRIL for the exclusive MWD subscriber digital magazine.

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The May/April 2025 MWD box will be available from Monday, May 5 to Saturday, May 10 ONLY. Mark your calendar so you don’t miss out on this “treasure trove for writers” delivered to your door every other month.

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I hope your WriteDay is fantastic!

~Joy


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“Advice on How to Get Your Writing Noticed from Estelle Erasmus”

“Advice on How to Get Your Writing Noticed from Estelle Erasmus”

GUEST POST from author/educator/journalist ESTELLE ERASMUS

As legendary memoirist Abigail Thomas said about Writing That Gets Noticed“It’s an encyclopedia of writing advice, but feels like a conversation.”

A Curious Mind Takes You A Long Way

I think a successful freelance writer keeps a curious mind, and a beginner mindset and gathers information, and then makes sure that the craft supports the execution of the essay, article or pitch. They also realize that publishing is a long game, and so they look into various ways to tell their stories: through micro memoir, substack posts (where they can accrue subscribers, and eventually get paid), podcasts and new technologies. The traditional media venues are shrinking so it’s important to find new ways to get what you want to say out there and build an audience for your message or writings.

The Importance of Building Your Craft 

I think that the cream rises to the top, and if people aren’t able to craft a story well, they will lose their readers over time. A publication may want them for a “clickbait” story, but once that story is over, if they don’t know how to tell other less sensational stories they won’t be published consistently in credible publications. I think to develop craft people can read books for ($20 and less) like mine, and others, read about craft in Brevity and Writer’s Digest, and listen to/watch free podcasts like Freelance Writing Direct that offers craft and writing advice, directly from authors, agents, editors and publishing and media professionals, including how to structure books.

The next level is attending online webinars for a small fee (I love the ones offered by Jane Friedman and also CRAFTSTALK). You might also consider taking a class at your community college, but make sure that the person teaching has the kinds of bylines or books you aspire to, as well as deep ties in the industry.

Another option is to take classes at established organizations like the ones I teach for Writer’s Digest. A fifth level is to take a university-level class for adults, which I teach at NYU’s School of Professional Studies.

Finally, they can invest in attending conferences (virtual and in-person) and going to sessions taught by industry leaders. Many writing coaches also offer 1 x 1 coaching which requires a deeper investment. I always advise having some experience with the person first before putting a great deal of money down.

How Can you Make Your Mark as a Journalist?

I would say that to make your mark as a journalist, it’s important to not shy away from the big story. Go Big! Don’t be afraid to challenge yourself to explore new, groundbreaking subjects. If you stick to doing round ups or very service oriented pieces (how to carpet your guest house), you won’t get the kind of attention to make a name for yourself. I always tell my writing coaching students that they should work on adding voice to any service pieces that they write. This can be done in the intro statement and also at the ending of a piece.

My Best Advice if You Want to Write

As Jackie Collins said, “If you want to be a writer-stop talking about it and sit down and write!”  To start out in a professional capacity, write anything you can and for everyone you can. When I was starting out I wrote brochure copy, book reviews, pieces for local newspapers, and then wrote for magazines once I became a magazine editor. But, I always kept learning and growing and never gave up.

If you want to write a memoir, start writing your stories, and try to get some of them out in micro memoir form. A lot of the bloggers that I knew when we all blogged have since written books. I think it helped that they were in the practice of writing every day, and kept honing their skills. It’s important to realize that publishing is a long game, and so think of your writing that way and never give up.

Estelle Erasmus: an award-winning journalist, is the author of WRITING THAT GETS NOTICED (named a “Best Book for Writers” by Poets & Writers Magazine), a Contributing Editor for Writer’s Digest, and host of the podcast Freelance Writing Direct. She is an adjunct instructor for NYU’s School of Professional Studies/Center for Publishing and Applied Liberal Arts, has written for over 150 publications, including The New York TimesNext Avenue/PBSWIREDThe Independent,The Washington Post, and AARP: The Magazine, and was the editor-in-chief of five national publications. Find out more at estelleserasmus.com and follow her on Substack at https://estelleserasmus.substack.com and on social media: @EstelleSErasmus.

Author of  Writing That Gets Noticed

In Poets & Writers “Best Books for Writers”

2023 Zibby Award winner for the “Best Book for The Writer”

Recipient 2023 NYU SPS Teaching Excellence Award

Contributing Editor, Writer’s Digest

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